Peer Critique

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Funny Captions

A very parched sheep attacking the public water fountain. Little boy was shocked that an animal can use the water fountain but he can't.

Public Parking Space. They were able to spot their car from a distance.

Buy now for a HALF price of one. The total cost had become SMALLER than ever!

Frosted Automobile. AC became too cold.

Great Black and White Photographers Part 3

1. The ones i chose were all scenery photos. Which are the ones i really like.

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First Picture: I see the high mountains with the clouds hovering around it, the river flowing, and the tall trees that takes up most of the area. I smell the salty water and the wet soil. I hear the river flowing in one direction, the birds chirping, and the movements of various animals coming from the forest. I taste the moisture that lingers in the air. I feel the dampness of the humid weather.

Second Picture: I see the bright light that shines on the frosted tree covered with white snow. I smell the  the cold damn air coming from the piles of snow on the ground. I hear the snow melting. I taste the cold  morning air. I feel the cold weather.

3. Blog or Powerpoint.

Academic Shoot Reflection

1. The hardest was to find a photo that clearly shows the composition your trying to look for.

2. The focus, framing, and the certain angle i was taking the photo at.

3. The Balance, since i didn't really understand the whole concept of it.

4. The subjects that i took.

5. Simplicity.

6. Balance.

7. Nothing, i pretty much know all the rules of composition.

Mural Project Preview

1. Something that represents each individual.

2. I would say both, some may feel more comfortable using their own phone while others don't.

3. I don't really have a specific place that id want to place the mural at. But i'd want a place that could make it stand out and that many others will walk by at.

Africa and Mural project preview

1. The photo's were really pretty. I liked how it was really focused on the animals, and the background really fits well with it. The scenery was beautiful also.

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3. It has a black and white effect, and the elephant has a spotlight in the middle. I love photos with a beautiful scenery, and from all the pictures, i think this had the best one.

4. I think it had balance. The sides of the photo is black while the middle is white.

5. -

A. Pentax 6711 with only two fixed lenses

B. He wants to show us the animal's true nature.

C. That we become closer to the animals, to not fear them as we do now.

D. "You wouldn't take a portrait of a human being from a hundred feet away and expect to capture their spirit; you'd move in close."

6 Rules Of Composition

Simplicity:

This photo is very simple. The main objective would be the gold star thats directly in the middle, making it very obvious.

Rule of Thirds:

It was slightly off. The student is the main subjective of this photo, and he is not directly placed on the middle. To make this photo better, i shouldn't have cut his foot off from the photo.

Lines:

This clearly shows lines everywhere. Therefore the subject would be vertical and horizontal lines. To anyone that sees this, they could tell its "Lines".

Balance:

This shows Symmetry. The subject is the students working side by side. They are even, if by chance they were flipped,they would be symmetry. If i could retake this photo again, it may be better if there were only two students,making it more simplistic.

Framing:

This is a good example of "Framing". The subject would be the people eating/sitting down. While the tree, and tree branch "frames" them. I would have taken the picture slightly farther to get a better look at it.

Avoiding Mergers:

This shows merging of two things. The subject would be the girl, and the pole shows them merging when the photo was taken at that certain angle. Anyone could tell that there was a merger in this picture by looking.

1. In the academys, for instance in the ACES academy, when the students are working with the animals like in the barn, or in the vet lab that we have in the school.

2. Ms.Welch , Mr. Fischer , Mr.John

3. I need to find a good model, hold the camera correctly to focus better, and with a good background.

Academics & Community Service

A browned hair girl pouring red colored water from a bottle on a bass, while wearing glasses to protect her eyes. The effect of it is the water is exploding as soon as it hits the bass.

1. The photo was zoomed in just like how i like taking pictures.

2. Simplicity- The photographer was focused on the reaction of the water as soon as it touches the bass.

Filling The Frame

The photo is filled in with a group of students gathering over a table filled with smoke flowing everywhere.

Action And Emotion

A dozen or so students of Fox Creek High School gathers around the flag pole to bow their heads altogether and pray while their hands are entwined with each others.

The Story

 The story of this photo is about students doing their part in the society by helping others in need. This photo shows their giving free food to the homeless.

Post Shoot Reflection

1. I had to think of something that emphasizes red,metal and happy , for metal,i had to make sure that it was actually metal, cause many things may look like it, but that is until you get a good look at it.

2. I thought about the focus more than the others, and how i held the camera, since how the picture will look depends on how you hold the camera in a certain angle.

3. I would have taken the photos in a different angle to make it look more interesting.

4. I like to take closed up photos, so i probably would have zoomed in if i was to take it again.

6. Yes, because the prompt was simple to understand, when i was asked to find "Red" ,i had many choices, since red can be anything.